What behavior I hate most is the young master behavior, seriously, i sucks...
anyway, yesterday bored, so I wrote another poem...
I thought this might be interesting...
I saw it! the island,
The island, so great, so majestic...
I touched it! the fine rock,
The fine rock, so strange, so rough, yet flat...
I climbed it, to the land,
To the land, so low, but hard to reach...
Yet it dropped, I woke, I realised,
With the class-board on floor, Oh! Gosh!
The whole class shook, darn it! I was...
DayDreaming
This is a kind of poem that I think is cool.
The first 2 lines tells the reader that the poet maybe in a boat and sailing the seas or something..
Then the next 2 lines will give a strange feeling to the reader, to attract it...
The 5th and 6th line make the reader bewilded, and make them wanna read more of the poem fast...
The following 3 lines will give a special ending that will shock the audience,
The last line is the title...
The syllables scheme is 6, 9, 6, 9, 6, 9, 8, 8, 8, tittle
Sunday, August 12, 2007
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